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8059 for the 8059 club's contest >> [link]

download to full view plz

THEME : "ALIVE"

Interpretation :
the first thing came in my mind with the theme "Alive"
was some part from the lyric of "winter love" by BoA,yeah! ,not a new one but beautiful,it's the bridge part that says:

" 未來は can't stop やって来る
悲しいほど はやく forever
幸せだって 傷付いたって
誰かを 愛する 時
JUST ALIVE"

translation by me [forgive me for my poor japanese]
"The future can't be stopped ,It's coming
It's sad that 'forever' turned to be so quickly
No matter I'm Happy or when I be hurt
When I fall in love with someone
JUST ALIVE"

.... when you fall in love with someone... that touched my heart from tha first time I heard this songs,for me it likes I can keep on going, I can't die... until the day my wish is granted,something likes that
In my opinion, for Gokudera, the one and only reason for his existence would be 'Juudaime' [the tenth] for sure [definitely!]
but for Yamamoto?what is his reason to be alive?dunno maybe it's baseball,maybe it's his friends [cause he hang out with tsuna and the gang all the time and tsuna saved him from suicide] or maybe it's gokudera... [however it's 8059 - -*]
They can't keep happiness forever when they choose mafia life ,involvement in the fight is one thing they must face, and to hurt and be hurt is following...so survive if they have "the thing" to believe in..
and that's all the reason why it comes to the pic [too long nee - -"]


ARMELIA says:
this is my first work for me to entering the contest [yeah although I'm pretty busy right now but just wanna try some thing fun ^^]
NOTE: I might do another one for this contest [ooi! wanna do it but.. OMG! I think I couldn't finish that in time T_T]

ไทยมั่งๆ [เพื่อ?...อะนะ ถือว่าให้คนที่อ่านไทยได้ล่ะกัน]
ปล. เนื้อร้องท่อนนั้น ตอนแรกที่ฟังโดยไม่ได้คิดอะไร ไม่ได้แปลมาตั้งแต่ท่อนแรกๆ แต่ก็ชอบเลย อารมณ์ประมาณว่า
" ไม่ว่าจะความสุขหรือความทุกข์ ในช่วงเวลาที่คุณรักใครสักคน.....just alive "
เหมือนกับว่า ถ้ามีเหตุผลที่จะมีชีวิตอยู่ต่อไป ก็ดีแล้ว..
โอ๊ย..ชอบเพลงนี้จังเลย [พล่ามอะไร ได้ข่าวว่าส่งcontest]

Should I upload the full size ? [it's very huge that delayed my SAI - -*]

Critiques


:iconsqu-chan:
In my opinion.. it's an awesome pic. I love the expression of Yamamoto, how hard he tries to reach Gokudera who is too weak to make a move. I read it was for a themed comission 'Alive'. I think its perfectly fits with it ^^ The colors are simply but for this picture it's a really good matching (whitexblackxred). The lightening make us to think about hope and surviving. I hate if something is not happy end so this is a good point too to not making the sky dark ^^
The reason I gave 4.5 point vision is the destroyed stuff coloring. Although it's an almost black and white pic I think it would be a little better if the things which are closer to us would have another tone color for example or something darker because Yamamoto and Gokdera's clothes are also gray.
Arme-chan has a great 'lineart' style which make her drawings more realistic but still anime look. I'm really envy because of this ^^ I love the background too because this ruined city scene gives an atmosphere of a disaster. Where the most important rule is.. Staying Alive ~
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:iconirethsingollo:
Awww, so beautiful ;3; Luv the colouring as usual and the clean lineart too :heart: And their expressions are so great *________*

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[DBSK talking about couples]
Jaejoong: Why is it YunJae and not JaeYun?
Yunho: *thinking* Maybe it's by Korean alphabet?
...
lol someone please tell them about the seme/uke thing :giggle:
:iconirenukia:
This is so wonderful~~ I love it lots :flirty:

Best of luck for the contest <3

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~ The two rules of procrastination: 1) Do it today. 2) Tomorrow will be today tomorrow ~
:iconomer-yaoi-love:
OMG I LOVE THIS!!!
Yama's so COOL!! and the colores are freaking awesome!!
I wish I could color like this ;;
This is so sad though T^T poor goku~ :iconsadplz:
BUT I STILL LOVE IT!! *is totally pmsing*
I LOVE YOU,BYE!! *runs away*
Oh no wait,gotta check your art before running away! *goes to your gallery*
BEWARE OF THE COMMENTS ATTACK!

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SUMMER!! that means that you guys are gonna suffer MORE then usual xD I'll be here EVERY DAY~ watching you O.O...
O___O
:iconinoxshika:
Absolutely beautiful picture, I'm stunned by the coloring and their expressions. And holy gosh, it's just a pleasure to stare at it and try to guess what they're thinking, what happened before.. *A*
Very, very nice job ! :heart:

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Do the impossible, see the invisible.

8059&MelloNear&Kamina make the world go round [and Hetalia too. ]:heart:
:iconherl-sora:
awwww i really love it!!!
kind of sad... but beautiful! x3

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♫And now you´re death inside, still you wonder why...♫
:iconrangiku-00:
โฮกกกกก งามมากเลยค่า
แบบว่าดูแล้วเศร้าขึ้นมาจับใจ
โดนอะไรกัน เลือดโชกเชียว XD
8059 contest โอ้วววว :love:
:iconaksus:
this is so beautiful and yet very sad ;____;
awesome work :happycry:

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♥I'm Ulquiorras official trash so...F*ck off! :lmao:
~GrimmUlquiFC :pointl: yaaay >w<
♥ZoroSanji FTW~~♥
:iconarmelia:
ดีใจที่ชอบนะค่ะ
ขอบคุณที่faveด้วยจ๊ะ

เศร้าหรอค่ะ อืม ตอนวาดก็รู้สึกเหมือนกันนิดๆนะ เพลงที่นึกถึง -ฟังตอนวาดมันก็เศร้านิดๆนะค่ะ
การจากกันนี่มันเศร้าจริงๆนะ
แถ้าให้ลองนึกถึงALIVEจริงๆแล้วเราคิดว่าลงสีแบบสดใสก็ดีค่ะ
แต่เราคิดว่าอยากลองตีความลึกกว่านั้นดูนอกจากความสดใส เลยออกมาทึมๆ
สงสัยอารมณ์พาไป~

จริงๆงานเยอะนะ ยังดันทู่ซี้อยากส่งคอนเทส

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Fly away ~How far can I go Until I reach a place where I can believe in love

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